Tag: Writing

  • Writing is a lonely  job –Tunde Babalola

    Writing is a lonely job –Tunde Babalola

    The Africa Magic Viewers’ Choice Award (AMVCA) has come and gone but, snippets of the glamorous event will occupy social discourse for a while. JOE AGBRO JR. captured some of the remarkable moments.

    He is hardly noticed, yet very essential in many movies is the work of the writer. However, Tunde Babalola got his fair share of recognition when he won the Best Writer (Drama) for October 1 and the Best Writer (Comedy) for The Meeting at the AMVCA.

    Receiving his award for Best Writer (Drama), Babalola appreciated the director and the cast and crew for turning his script into the award-winning October 1.

    Commenting on the need to show appreciation to writers, Babalola said, “I just want to say writing is a very lonely job and I want to say to all producers and directors out there to continue to show writers the support, regard and respect that we deserve.”

    Babalola, who didn’t know that a second award was coming his way would immediately come back on stage to receive the Best Writer (Comedy) Award for The Meeting. This time around, Babalola simply said: “It’s like waiting at a bus-stop for a bus to turn up forever, then two turns up the same time.”

    He then went ahead to give kudos to Mildred Okwo, Rita Dominic, Femi Jacobs, Kate Henshaw and the rest of the cast and crew of The Meeting for interpreting his story into the movie

  • ‘I have overcome that fear of writing and sharing’

    ‘I have overcome that fear of writing and sharing’

    The United Kingdom (UK) believes it has eradicated racism in the workplace. But, Africans know too well that it is still there. Your accent, the colour of your skin stand you out, and in certain cases, make it hard for you to fit in. Laws cannot prevent workplace cynicism and the silent slurs targeted at you for being the colour you are. A Fly Girl is Amanda Epe’s debut book, an inspirational memoir of her days working with British Airways; travel tales through the lens of a black African woman. Epe’s well-documented and interesting book is the first narrative of its kind as she is the first seminal story-teller on the narrative of being a black cabin crew member with the British Airways. Epe writes articles, essays, poetry, fiction and her work has featured in publications and anthologies in the UK, the United States (U.S.), and Nigeria. She speaks to Tundun Adeyemo. Excerpts:

    Why did you write this book?

    I was obliged to write this for my spirit and I didn’t want to take this story unpublished to the grave.

    What is your favourite part in the story?

    If I had to put a bookmark in one place, it would be the active, funny, bright and sunny story in Miami.

    At what time or point  did you feel the need to write the story?

    It was strongly felt in 2013, a time of writing in my serene state and being fully inspired. It was the starting point anyway. At least, I put a pen to paper and wrote the first paragraph; most of the work continued the following year.

    Racism occurs in different ways to different people, and many talk about this every day. What more are you adding to the conversation?

    My angle has some insights into the in-depth thoughts of being black and wearing the Union Jack.

    Is there a place for the woman in the business community?

    During my life in the air, I worked with business savvy women and I reflect on one in particular that endeavoured to become a grand entrepreneur through trade and travel, she was an inspiration. Women are not just in business, but are on top. I admired a recent report of a black British woman, Karen Blackett, who is the first businesswoman to top the Powerlist 100, and also Folorunsho Alakija on the billionaire list, the latter an example of how times have advanced with women working and trading in oil.

    When you talk to women across the world, what is the one thing they tell you?

    We are all singing the same song, but with various tunes, in the western world equality is still sought, and across the globe we are coming out, stepping up or striving to make our mark.

    Is it a question really that black people are not well integrated into the community?

    In comparison to other western nations I feel that black communities are somewhat integrated, until we are fully empowered economically there will always be marginalisation

    You have a very British accent, is this book personal then? How can you suffer racism when you are British?

    My being British has a prefix; readers can learn more about this concept in reading some chapters in the book.

    Returning home to Nigeria… is that an option?

    To run from racism is just running, if I had run away as a new recruit, I wouldn’t be telling this story. How long must one fight is another story. In the play Pandora’s Box by playwright, Ade Solanke, this issue of returning to Nigeria was discussed, one of the characters the uncle was telling the Diaspora his niece and her friend to “stay there” (UK) and fight. The friend, who had decided to make a new life in Nigeria (the character Bev whose parents migrated to Britain from the Caribbean), argued against him speaking about England saying: “ Uncle, I’d love to contribute to my country. I’ve tried to.

    But do they want my contribution? Well, I refuse to be wasted!” She goes on to say that we are more than English and wanting to discover another part of her. I agree with the character, and Nigeria is certainly an option. Look at the statistics of Black British actors and entertainers who cross the pond heading to USA.

    You are campaigning for women and their issues. Is this another empowering tool?

    It is simply my writing journey although it is part of empowering. If a woman reader feels inspired in her journey by relating to my writing/storytelling, then that is a success for me.

    What is next to for you to conquer?

    The mission continues. I must follow the call to write and to work, to do the things that give me joy, the works that are creative and that can be shared.

    Why should I buy your book?

    Two words, I guarantee you’ll engage and enjoy it.

    What will our readers hear about your book that they haven’t heard elsewhere?

    This author shares her experiences and thoughts from her travels, and discusses taboo topics and issues not easily for conversation in our and the wider community.

    If you were me right now, what sort of questions should you be asking?

    O.K I would like to tell you about the euphoric feeling of delivering my debut, and that it was created for people like me, but also beyond that target group. If you ask about my readership I feel that outside of Black women in the Diaspora and at home, this book relates and can be read by an international audience of men and women.

    How long did it take you to write this book?

    About nine months flat.

    Is there a part two coming soon?

    My journey and travels continue, a travel series perhaps.

    Can you share two thoughts with our readers?

    Many people are afraid to fly, my thoughts on this analogy is to feel the fear and still take off. I have overcome that fear of writing and sharing, so please do share your stuff!

    Where can we find more about your book?

    A Fly Girl, the kindle version is now available on Amazon. A Fly Girl will be available in print from Amazon, Waterstones and all good retailers by January 2015.

  • ‘Nigerian writing has long come of age’

    ‘Nigerian writing has long come of age’

    For 10 years now, the Nigeria Liquefied Natural Gas (NLNG) Limited has been giving $100,000 to the best Nigerian writer yearly. It is the highest Literature prize in the country. It also sponsors of the CORA book party, which brings together the shortlisted authors and book lovers. Why does the company promote creative writing? In this exclusive interview with Evelyn Osagie, the NLNG General Manager, External Affairs, Mr Kudo Eresia-Eke, a poet, says literature is the soul of life as it excites the reading culture.

    what is your opinion on the state of the creative writing in the country?

    The Nigerian writing has long come of age. No matter how you look at it, when you talk literature on the world scene, Nigeria is present. And now we are blossoming and expanding. The quality and the quantity are increasing. If you look at the breadth of experiences that we are sharing today, it is far much more than what we used to know. We have indigenous, those in the Diaspora and we have the mix. Different kinds of cultures come into play and people are experimenting. And we see the spectrum of those, who were shortlisted recently. From the list of hundreds that participated only 11 were shortlisted.  Their ages (17 and above), their educational background (there is a professor), give you an idea of the breadth. Young people are getting into the spree, as young as 17, that gives you an idea of how much impact is being made. It is getting to the grassroots and that is great to know.

    As a businessman, do you think literature has the economic potential worth investing in?

    The truth is our interest in literature is not so much for the business side. There would be those, who would reap from it. Publishers, promoters and writers may reap from it, but our interest is in promoting literature purely as literature; promoting the reading culture because when we excite literature, it would excite enough quality that people would be attracted to. And this would influence more people to get involve; it would also influence more readers, the growth of our nation and excellence. And we never know where it would lead to because once you light a candle; you’d never know how many other candles that candle would ignite.

    Ten years on, how has the journey been  so far in sponsoring the Literature Prize?

    It has been fulfilling for the company. To have initiated a Nigeria Prize for Literature, which in such a short span has assumed a continental and possible world stature, attracting response and support from across the spectrum of writers and lovers of literature worldwide. The Prize was instituted for the benefit of Nigeria, and so we are happy that Nigeria is reaping the benefits, as you can see from the value and volume of literature inspired, the enthusiasm and energy of book lovers/affiliated workers generated, and the excitement of the reading culture in our land.

    Were there challenges encountered during the period?

    Nothing prospers without challenges, so for the Prize to acquire the level of reputation and respect it enjoys today, we had to painstaking work at the challenges not as stumbling blocks, but as climbing blocks. There have been quite a few of those challenges, which nevertheless have helped the Prize to be better honed for greater acceptability and worthiness. Of course, not much would have been achieved without the huge support enjoyed from the Advisory Board, the judges, the writers and the media that have worked with us all the way.

     Supporting Literature over the years, what does NLNG stand to benefit from this venture?

    That’s a very good question because sometimes when you look at it, it seems there is a disconnect between a gas company, a technology-based company, supporting literature. But this is where we link up. The vision of the Nigerian LNG is to be a global company helping to build a better Nigeria. Now, no nation can be built in darkness, the writers bring light and enlightenment, they bring intelligence, they excite the reading culture. Technology cannot improve if people don’t read. So, it instigates reading – they make us read, learn and make us students…excited pupils who want to know things about the world. That is where they come in. So they are a fundamental pillar for nation-building, fundamental pillar for improving and making Nigeria better – that is why we doff our hats for the writers.

    So, you belong to the school of thought that says there exists a more profound connection between literature and science?

    Yes. The basis of science is literature, because except you learn to read and write, you can’t express yourself in science. Notice that a lot of the science writers are originally from the literary background; that is the only way they can express complex ideas in simple terms that children can understand and that people can appreciate. So, writing is also part of science.

    What informed NLNG decision to extend the prize to Nigerians in the Diaspora?

    Nigerians are fundamentally very determined people and we love competition. And the more we compete, the better we get. A Nigerian is a Nigerian no matter the part of the world, he or she lives. It doesn’t matter whether you live in the moon, if you are a Nigerian please get on it. And we believe Nigerians can compete with those from any part of the world.

    What stands the Prize out from others in the country?

    I think the support it enjoys – from a whole spectrum of society. It enjoys support from the media, the arts, the academia, local and international audience. It stands very high when you look at the quality of judges and members of the advisory board. It is eminent and loved. There is a good reason behind it.

    What is that reason?

    Laughs. The integrity of the process and people can see that.

     

  • At 80, I can’t stop writing

    At 80, I can’t stop writing

    Publisher, Islamic scholar and missioner, Alhaji Ayo Adeyemi, releases 11 educational books at 80 and tells Edozie Udeze that he can never stop writing 

    This is indeed a season of birthdays for several senior citizens in Nigeria. From the Nobel laureate, Prof. Wole Soyinka, who clocked 80 on Sunday; media giant, Prince Henry Odukomaiya, who also recently clocked 80; and ace columnist, Dr. Olatunji Dare, who has also hit 70, it is indeed a season of birthdays.

    Now, on July 27, entrepreneur, writer and publisher of the defunct newspaper, ‘Lagos Flight’, Alhaji Ayo Adeyemi, will also clock 80. Like the other ‘ birthday boys’ who have celebrated the landmarks in different ways, Adeyemi, who is also the founder of the Isolo, Lagos-based Islamic Mission Organisation, has rekindled the writer in him. He has published 11 new books aimed at exposing pupils to the rudiments of Islam.

    The books include ‘Why I am Proud to be a Muslim’, ‘Fasting’, Abridged History of Prophet Mohammed’, ‘The Concept of Prayer (Salat) in Islam’ and ‘What is Qadar or Predestination?’

    Others include ‘Knowledge is Power’ ‘All Roads to Arafat’ and ‘Act of Charity (Zakat)’.

    That Adeyemi is a seasoned teacher, researcher, writer and publisher are evident in each of the books. Apart from the fact that they are detailed and revealing, the materials are presented in simple language that children will especially cherish.

    While Adeyemi discusses topics such as  ‘The Effect of Zakat’, ‘Amount of Contribution’  and ‘General Condition that makes Zakat Obligatory’, he coaches the reader on ‘Nabi or the Prophet of God’ and ‘Kidden Knowledge’ in Why I am Proud to be a Muslim’.

    At 80, Adeyemi is still physically fit. He not only freely walks around, he still drives himself around Lagos, an exercise that, he believes, helps in keeping him alert. But a mark of his creative alertness is the books which Islamic scholars have received with much excitement.

    Commenting on the works, the Dean, Faculty of Arts, Lagos State University, Ojo, Dr. Isaq Akintola, notes in the foreword that Adeyemi is a man whose passion for Islam is instructive. The scholar, who is also the Director, Muslim Rights Concern, saluted the writer for his contributions to the development of Islam in Nigeria. Also, he uses the opportunity to correct the wrong impression that some people have about Adeyemi’s preaching, as the latter is a radical missionary who does not believe in using religion to bamboozle adherents.

    Akintola writes, “Alhaji Adeyemi comes across as a man with great organisational skills,” Akintola writes. “He is a highly talented manager of men “His passion for Islam knows no bounds. He is also an artist nulli secundus. This is where he surpasses many businessmen of his ilk. He has successfully combined mastery of business integrity with musical stardom. He has produced many enticing albums and his works linger on till today.”

    According to Adeyemi, who is also an Islamic gospel artiste, having released albums while also planning to record more songs, the books are published as part of the  ‘Islamic Foundation for Beginners Series’. He explains that that they are to advance the Islamic catechism for which he is famous, having been one of the pioneers of Islamic tracts in Nigeria. He says the series were conceived to show young Musilms fundamental knowledge of Islam.

    The writer adds, “Islam enjoins us all to search knowledge and the truth. But many people do not bother to get that knowledge first. The lack of the real principles of Islam is the genesis of the security problems we are having, especially the Boko Haram issue. Islam is a religion of peace. Now, it is important to bring up our children in the right direction, and that is why I decided to write the books.”

    Although he rose from grace to grass, having lost his father at an early age, Adeyemi has remained committed to the growth of knowledge. He says he lives by example in this wise, as he is not only a committed writer, he is still a passionate reader.

    “I cannot stop reading. I read even up till today. A leader must be a good reader particularly the kind of people I have been privileged to lead are people you can’t lead through the nose. You have to be intelligent and educated, and know what is happening around you and globally. That is the essence of religion, anyway. It is not about just prayers, it is about leadership in every facet. There are so many professionals that I am privileged to lead. So I have to carry everyone ahead. I have been interviewed by many university students coming for researches. As a religious leader, you have to lead by reading,” he says in an interview.

    He adds that he delved in to singing as means of propagating Islam.

    His words, “It is all about propagation. When we were young, the most popular religion of the day was Islam in Lagos because there were lots of merriment and entertainment. It was sweet. There were lots of things to eat by both Muslims and non-Muslims. People enjoyed those things. And most churches then only opened on Sundays. And apart from hymns and prayers, there was no dancing. The people that introduced dancing and marching around were the Salvation Army, then later the Aladura. It was strictly formal. The mosque was virtually open till night every day. What was missing in Islam was introduced by the Pentecostal churches.

    “Majority of the people who went to church then were not there because they loved church, but because of problems and once the problems got solved, they stayed back. So I introduced choir, bought drums and other things because I wanted people to stay back even after their problems had been solved. That was how I started going to the studio to keep people’s interest, especially the younger generation. Once they come for the music, I also speak to them, and through that, they stay. It is working even though I am being criticised. But until someone shows me where the Holy Quran prohibits what I am doing, it is not wrong and I will continue.”

     

  • Seshat revived: further thoughts on the  state of reading and writing in our country

    Seshat revived: further thoughts on the state of reading and writing in our country

    In the second segment of last week’s essay in this column, I joined my voice to the voices of thousands of those greatly excited by the declaration by UNESCO of Port Harcourt as the Book Week Capital for this year. In a move calculated to indicate how long and deep are the roots of writing on our continent, I pressed a drawing of Seshat, the Egyptian goddess of writing, knowledge and wisdom, into service as a photographic frame for my celebration of the achievement of the Rainbow Book Club and its efforts to revive reading and writing among schoolchildren and our youths. In order to reflect more deeply on the significance of that invocation of the Egyptian goddess of writing in last week’s essay, I wish this week to explore what it means in the contemporary period to go all the way back to ancient Egypt in order to give resonance to my encouragement of the yeoman efforts being made at the present time to revive reading and writing in our country.

    I am sure that it could not have escaped many readers that it is because ancient Egyptian civilization was literate, indeed greatly treasured writing, that I invoked the goddess Seshat in last week’s essay. Shamanistic or miracle rainmakers are not found in desert communities and cultures; where rain hardly ever falls, a rainmaker will strive in vain and will starve. Although our continent invented some of the earliest writing systems and their enabling scripts, until the beginnings of the modern age, writing was not widely distributed in the vast majority of the societies and cultures of our continent. That is why gods and goddesses of writing do not exist in cultures in which writing does not exist. To give an apt and epigrammatic illustration of this observation, Orunmila of the Yoruba pantheon is the god of knowledge and wisdom; his divine patronage of culture and the arts does not include writing and writers.

    Historically, Egyptian and Ethiopic writing systems were the main cultures of literacy and writing on our continent. Writing systems and scripts like Vai and Nsibidi in our own region of the continent did not develop into full scale and widely distributed regimes of writing and reading with consolidated extensions to processes and institutions for recording and preserving knowledge. In sum then, writing is both very ancient and very new in our continent, depending on which regions and cultures of Africa one is talking about. But this is not the main point that I wish to emphasize in this piece.

    The main point that I wish to emphasize and develop into a full discussion in this essay is this: in the modern world, while it helps to have a long and ancient tradition of writing and literacy in one’s culture, it is not, and need not become a permanent cultural disability not to have had an ancient writing and literate tradition in one’s society. The deep historical truth is that once writing is introduced into any society, it becomes a considerably powerful means of recording and transmitting knowledge and experience across time and the generations; and it also becomes a powerful force for progress and the advancement of learning. But we must recognize that writing does not perpetuate itself, does not become a force for progress just by the force of its own intrinsic value. And writing systems change all the time; they are reinvented perpetually and in fact sometimes superseded by other writing systems and thereby go into oblivion. One graphic illustration of this historic reality is the fact that all the writing systems and scripts of ancient Africa have gone into oblivion and all the ideographic scripts like Vai and Nsibidi indigenous to West Africa before the introduction of the currently globally hegemonic Latin script have massively declined in the limited value and currency they once had. To put this observation across in concrete terms, other than cultural pride and the memorializing of past greatness, the Ethiopic scripts of Geez and Amharic confer no special advantages to modern Ethiopia and Eritrea over present-day Ghana and Nigeria. We must celebrate the achievements that produced the ancient writing scripts of Africa, even if they all now belong in the metaphoric museum of history, but what we make of writing and literacy in our age lies completely in our hands. This is why the title of this essay starts with the phrase, “Seshat revived”.

    Let me give a concrete illustration of this phrase by alluding to my own experience and the experience of my generation with regard to reading and writing as inestimable vectors of pleasure, learning, enlightenment and progress, personal and collective. Today, the bookshops of the University of Ibadan and the Obafemi Awolowo University, Ife, look like ghostly hulks of what they once were when I was an undergraduate at the former and a teacher and researcher at the latter. It used to entail such cultural and emotional anguish for me to visit these bookshops that I have completely stopped entering them. Indeed, the anguish has become so deeply ingrained in relation to the U.I. bookshop that I often quickly walk past it when, over a weekend, I am staying with the Osofisans on the campus of the University.

    On a larger scale, with the exception of perhaps only Lagos and Abuja, bookshops in all Nigerian cities are today like gutted, emptied versions of what they once were. When I was reading for my GCE “A” levels, there was no book on my required texts that I couldn’t get in several bookshops in Ibadan. This is apart from books that I regularly bought just for my reading pleasure – the bookshops were well stocked with them. And yet the Nigeria of today, the country of my late adult life is immensely wealthier than the Nigeria of my early life and young adulthood. Bookshops throughout the country should be bursting with a cornucopia of books on all subjects as bookshops tend to be in the nations of the world that truly value writing and reading. But for the herculean efforts of intrepid and dedicated dealers in the book trade like Booksellers of Ibadan and Glendora of Lagos (and others very thinly spread throughout Nigeria whose existence is unknown to me), we would still be going through the book drought that prevailed through much of the late 80s and early to mid-90s.

    Let me come to the heart of what I am trying to put across in this essay. The great decline in reading among our children and youths and the equally catastrophic fall in standards of writing in books and newspapers in our country have many causes. But the chief cause is the fact that instead of giving a big boost to reading and writing, our oil wealth bonanza has done the exact opposite: it has fostered a pervasive philistine indifference to the great role that writing – and writing well – plays in all modern societies. In this respect, the very poor state of bookshops all over the country and the mediocre levels of writing that pervade much of what is published in virtually all our newspapers, are both symptoms and causes of the poverty that reigns supreme in our country today.

    I do not wish to be misunderstood. It is not writing and reading as such that produced the grim statistic of 7 out of every 10 Nigerians living below the poverty line; it is gargantuan corruption, mismanagement and squandermania on a colossal scale that bear the responsibility for such an abysmal level of widespread poverty in the midst of vast oil wealth. But a decline in the quality of writing such as we are seeing now carries with it a disastrous fall in the quality of the intellectual life of the nation and is thus epiphenomenal to corruption and squandermania as the primary causes of poverty on such a large scale. Moreover, let us keep this in mind: for good or ill, we live now in the highly competitive world of a fully globalized capitalism in which intellectual capital and property occupy a pivotal place in the distribution of wealth and poverty between and within the nations of the planet. If by a revolutionary stroke of good fortune looting, waste and squandermania were to be terminated in our country next month, next year or the year after that, we would still have the task of a complete reform of our educational system, our reading habits and the quality of writing in our country to meet the challenges of 21st century global capitalism. Let me put this in the form of a pointed question: how can we ever become big players in the continental and global economies if our educational systems and the intellectual level indicated in the general quality of writing in our country remain so abysmally low?

    I testify that at one time in the not-too distant past in this country reading and writing among the literati, as cultural habits and intellectual attainments, were of world class standard. I testify also that as that national literati expanded in number and demographics, highbrow, mid-brow and lowbrow levels in reading and writing emerged as they have done in nearly all modern societies; but mediocrity did not swamp and overwhelm writing and reading in the country. But now, except in a few locations or oases where reading and writing are still encouraged and nourished, “lowbrow” has completely eaten up both “mid-brow” and “highbrow”.

    But all is not lost. Apart from the Rainbow Book Club whose activities I highlighted in last week’s column, I know of several other groups around the country where reading of novels and poetry and lively discussions on the state of writing and reading in the country are held regularly. I know of bookshops that are now relatively well-stocked and publishers that are once again giving superb, professionally competent editing to the books they are now publishing. But these are little streams, they are rivulets where we should have mighty seas of renewal – as we once did in this country. Seshat revived: writing has a long and hallowed history on our continent. But that history amounts to nothing if our present and our posterity are completely under the shadow of the prevailing and dominant philistinism in the intellectual and cultural affairs of Nigeria, the like and the scale of which was once foreign to this country.

     

     

    Erratum:

    In last week’s column, where I should have described the dictionary entry on the Latin phrase in extremis as the epigraph to the essay, I mistakenly called it the epilogue. The error is due to insufficient self-correction after the completion of the essay. This is a risk, a specter that all columnists face: sometimes, you miss obvious errors in your own essay that others would easily spot.

     

    Biodun Jeyifo

    bjeyifo@fas.harvard.edu

     

  • Other fundamentals of effective business writing(2)

    Last week, we said managers and leaders need to express their ideas clearly, concisely and completely when speaking and writing. We expatiated that if your written messages are not clear or lack important details, people will be confused and will not know how to respond.

    We said for you to be an effective writer, we said you need have knowledge of your objective and list; organise your ideas; support and separate your ideas; use complete and short sentences; and be precise and accurate. We added that you also need to use commas appropriately; use the correct words; avoid redundancies and use numbers in the body of your writing.

    We stressed that you should think before you write and ensure you fully understand the assignment. We said if you have trouble getting started, you should try to discuss your ideas with someone else. We expatiated that ‘kicking an idea around’ often helps you clarify your objective and fine-tune what you are trying to accomplish.

    We educated that organising your ideas constitutes yet another principle of good writing as it helps readers to easily identify the discussed ideas. We explained that supporting your ideas is another major step in the process of good writing, and there are a number of ways you can support your ideas, including explanations, examples, facts, personal experiences, stories, statistics and quotations.

    Having a conclusion

    It is important for your piece of writing to have a conclusion. Would you like watching a movie that has no end or conclusion? The conclusion brings your points together. This is important because the reader wants to know the bottom line message.

    Editing your work

    You also need to edit your work. Read what you have written several times. On your first reading, focus on organisation and sentence structure. Shorten long sentences. Cross out unnecessary words and phrases. Reorganise material as needed. Read your work again and make sure commas are used appropriately and that there is a punctuation mark at the end of every sentence.

    Read it the third time and focus on word choice. Are there certain words that are vague or ambiguous? Replace them with specific words. Read what you have written aloud to yourself or to a friend to see if he or she (and you) can understand it and adjust it in any way. A significant part of good writing involves editing. Very few people can sit down and write a perfect paragraph on their first try. It requires multiple rewrites.

    Seeking help

    There are many sources today through which you can seek help on how to improve your writing. You do not have to be a great writer to be a successful manager or leader. However, you must be able to clearly and succinctly explain your thoughts and ideas in writing. Strive to be simple, clear, and brief. Like any skill, “good writing” requires practice, feedback, and constant improvement.

     

    Word segmentation

    In the course of writing or typing, it often becomes necessary to divide a word at the end of the line as a result of lack of enough space for accommodating the complete form of the word. The segmentation or division is structurally reflected through the addition of a hyphen (-), which comes immediately after the first part of the divided word at the end of the line.

    Some English language users do not bother to divide words at all at the end of the line, especially when writing in long hand. However, for those who maintain the consciousness of always adding a hyphen whenever there is a need for word segmentation, the following methods would be of immense help to them:

    Division by structure

    This is concerned with morphology which is defined as the study of the morphemes of a language and the way they are joined together to make words. Morphemes refer to the smallest meaningful units into which words can be broken. Therefore, division by structure implies dividing a word into the smaller units of meaning from which it is built up. The division may be along a prefix line, such as in-, un-, dis-, -im, etc. (as inappropriate, unpredictable, disappointment, impossible, etc.) or a suffix such as -ish, -ful, -able, etc. (as in Foolish, Spoonful, Surmountable, etc.).

    Division by syllable

    This is another way of dividing a word. It is concerned with dividing a word along the line of syllables or units of sound. For example, the word Fortune contains two syllables, that is, For-tune, while Unfortunately contains five, that is, Un-for-tu-nate-ly. Therefore, if these words are to be divided, one must make sure that the spot or spots of syllabic division are strictly observed. To divide Unfortunately, for example, the possible forms of structural fragments are Un-, Unfor-, Unfortu- and Unfortunate-.

    In the dictionary, the bold dot(.) is used to mark the recommended places of word-division for all headwords, derivatives and compounds.

    Division by meaning

    Division by meaning is concerned with the decision of whether each part of a divided word can be understood or spoken so that the complete word is easily recognised from the two parts. For example, it may be a compound word made up of two different words, such as Head and Master as in Headmaster; Playing and Field as in Playing field; Single and Parent as in Singleparent, etc.

    Note that in writing a compound word, three types of structure are possible, that is, combination, separation and hyphenation. In other words, you can write it together as one, separate it, or add a hyphen

    Summary of the word-division rules

    Do not divide a suffix or two syllables such as –fully, –able, -ably, etc. Apart from the suffix –ly, do not divide a word so that a suffix of two letters (such as –ed, er, -ic, etc.) begins the next line. Do not divide a word of fewer than five letters. Do not divide a monosyllabic word, that is, a word of one syllable. Do not segment a word such that one of its parts is a single letter.

    PS: For those making inquiries about our Public Speaking, Business Presentation and Professional Writing Skills programme, please visit the website indicated on this page for details. Till we meet on Monday.

     

     

     

    •GOKE ILESANMI, Managing Consultant/CEO of Gokmar Communication Consulting, is an International Platinum Columnist, Certified Public Speaker/MC, Communication Specialist, Motivational Speaker and Career Management Coach. He is also a Book Reviewer, Biographer and Editorial Consultant.

     

    Tel: 08055068773; 08187499425

    Email: gokeiles2010@gmail.com

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  • Guide to judgment writing

    Guide to judgment writing

    From the inquisitive nature of man flows the desire to know what is in the mind of others. This is particularly so when the actions of those others are capable of affecting our lives in one way or the other. The judge occupies such a position as his pronouncements during adjudication affects numerous lives. The ability to predict the outcome of a case by visualising it as a judge thus becomes desirable. In a different light, knowing the mind of a judge is key to legal comprehension as the knowledge of how judges do decide, or should decide cases is of essence to understanding law itself. These have found expression in judicial reasoning, which is ‘the process by which a judge reaches a conclusion as to the appropriate result in a case and to the written explanation of that process in a published judgment’. The fact that two seemingly similar cases may not produce the same outcome and the fact that the result of legal disputes subject to adjudication is not predictable has made it necessary for subjects of the law to understand how the mind of the judge works.

    Understanding the mind of the judge will involve going on a philosophical and jurisprudential voyage and this is what this book has done in twelve chapters.

    Judicial Reasoningm a 12-chapter book was published by by the Nigerian Institute of Advanced Legal Studies (NAILS). It discusses the concept of judicial reasoning by exploring the thought of a judge and what influnces during judgments.

    The first chapter, written by Peter Ademu Anyebe is titled: Stares Decisis: Step to Conclusion. He explains stare decisis as a step to conclusion, noting that principles established by previous cases are not inviolable. It elucidates that the doctrine to stand by a precedent is a principle of decision making and not a rule and as such needs not be applied when the precedent at issue is badly reasoned. The approaches taken by the courts in deciding whether to overrule a precedent are discussed in this chapter. The expository nature of this chapter is seen when the writer enumerates the factors that guide the courts in overruling precedents while citing some notable instances where precedents have been overruled.

    The second chapter is titled: Judicial Reasoning and Personal Idiosyncrasies and is written by Dr. Adebisi Arewa. The writer argues here that the most significant responsibility of the judiciary is fidelity to the law and adjudication of cases in accordance with the law. While agreeing that the attitudes and beliefs of judges are critical determinant factors of their decisions, the writer posits that the attitudinal perspective is an element of the extra legal paradigm of judicial decision making. He writes: “All legal systems have their criteria for determining legality and or legitimacy of judicial decisions. These criteria include constitutional and statutory enactments judicial precedent and the formal and legal process for establishing them, and informal norms and social values which are indeterminate, inexact, subjective and of low justificatory value and often confined in the subconscious where they nevertheless impact on judicial reasoning and decision. Once the rules of validation are clearly stated, each factor whether formal or informal can then be ranged against such rules pursuant to determining their legitimacy ad legality, for the purpose of judicial reasoning and judicial decision making.”

    This chapter reveals that contrary to the portrayal of judging as a value free, detached and dispassionate process predicated on facts and legal precedents, that extra-legal factors such as psychological, attitudinal and social background play significant role in the judicial decision making process.

    Chapter three, written by Dr. Francisca E. Nlerum, is titled: Towards Substantive Justice in Nigeria. It discusses the concept of substantial justice by first positing that the court is able to provide substantive justice through stating the law, providing fair trial, acceptable outcome and ultimately, constraining and directing human behaviour. She said the structure of the substantive law, rule and procedure has direct implication on the perception and construction steps necessary to provide substantive justice. The exercise of discretion by the courts is examined in this chapter as the writer writes “… the exercise of such discretion is controlled and manipulated by the structure and function of substantive law, rule ad procedure upon which the discretion is exercised. The judge’s ability to exercise fair discretion by being impartial and objective is called to question and such burden places on him an expectation to produce consistent result …”

    Addressing the extent at which extraneous conditions can be resorted to in order to qualify as judicial activism, this chapter examines landmark cases such AG Bendel State v AG Federation & Ors, AG Federation v AG Abia State & Ors, Plateau State of Nigeria & Anor v AG Federation, Amaechi v INEC among others. It concludes by acknowledging that substantive justice can only be promoted by judicial activism.

    Chapter four titled: Research and Judicial Reasoning, written by Ige Adeola Olabomi, shows the nexus between legal research and judicial reasoning. It says that research plays an important role in recommending solutions to existing problems of the society particularly in judicial reasoning. The reader is informed of doctrinal legal research which is concerned with the formulation of legal doctrines through the analysis of legal rules. This chapter analyses the sources of legal research in Nigeria and the writer likens research in judicial reasoning to scientific research. According to the writer “…the more nearly we are able to predict what decision will be made by the courts on a given state of facts, the more nearly do we approach to a scientific and civilized jurisprudence… ”

    Chapter five is titled: Analysis of Brief of Counsel and is written by Osatohanmwen Eruaga. The writer in this chapter x-rays the concept of brief of counsel by considering the various types of briefs there are, and when they may be used in appeal process as well as what is expected of a brief by the court. Well versed in legal history in Nigeria, the chapter traces the history of brief writing in Nigeria. The writer discusses the concept and importance of brief of argument through citing and reporting of required cases as well as the Supreme Court Rules. Going through the cases, this chapter discusses the structure and contents of briefs of arguments. The chapter is particularly enriched by rulings of learned justices explaining brief of arguments as well as the contents. One of these as quoted by the writer is on the brevity of a brief where the Supreme Court stated per Oputa JSC in Engineering Enterprise v Att. Gen. Kaduna. “As the name implies, a brief should be brief. It should be short enough to be attractive yet long enough to cover the substance …” Still on the length of briefs, the writer cautions on restrictions. She writes “… restricting the number of pages in the brief of argument as done in some jurisdictions such as the United States, would affect negatively the brief system in Nigeria by exposing the system to more “empty” or faulty briefs provided within the limits as provided.” The chapter concludes by reinforcing the need for counsel to attach the same level of seriousness the court displays when producing the brief by adhering to the general rules of brief writing.

    In Chapter 6 ,which is titled: Prophesy of the Courts written by Suzzie Onyeka Oyakhire, the definition of law as the prophecies of what the courts will do is scholarly analysed. The chapter reasons that this lay the foundation for the 19th century reliance on the doctrine of judicial precedents which has influenced legal thinking and which also is the crux of the legal systems of common law jurisdiction including Nigeria. Through identifying and analyzing arguments in favour of and against the prediction premise of judicial precedents, the writer examines the idea behind the prophesies of the courts.The writer considers the binding effect of the judgments of the court which until they are appealed and reversed by a higher court, remain the law and govern the affairs of subjects. She writes “A classical example of judicial precedent which has set the foundation for the principle of negligence in the law of torts is the decision of Lord Atkins in the case of Donoghue v Stevenson. This decision has formed the crux of determining the liability of the neighbor who owes a duty of care to another and breaches that duty of care. Since the decision of the court in that case it is apt to conclude that the bad man and the society at large can predict that if he acts in a way that causes injury to his neighbor, he would be liable under the law of torts.” (p.138). The writer identifies judicial activism as one of the factors which challenge the prediction theory as judges do not only apply the law as it is but sometimes extend it and at other times create new ones. The role played by ratio decidendi in the judgment of the court is analysed in this chapter as the writer identifies that when faced with similar fact cases, a later court may give different reasons for arriving at a particular conclusion notwithstanding that the cases were tried with exactly the same law. She cites the instance of the proliferation of conflicting decisions arising from election petitions in Nigeria and cites the cases of Ugwu v Ararume and Amaechi v INEC as examples. This chapter canvasses that while the importance of ‘prophesy of the courts’ cannot be undermined, its characteristics as a tool for absolute prediction is however questionable. The chapter examines this in the light of judicial activism, contradictory and dissenting precedents and more importantly with the instrumentality of statutes which may alter the validity of previous predictions.

    In Chapter 7 titled: Specialisation as a factor in Judicial Reasoning, Prof Animi Awah infers that judicial reasoning depends not only on legal imperatives but also on social philosophy, moral imperatives and political justification. This has made judges to continue being generalists even when the courts are specialised. The reason for this, according to the writer, is the fact that law is no longer restricted to the traditional issues any more but cuts across all discernible areas of human endeavours. The chapter examines the theories of judicial reasoning; it discusses specialisation and brings out the impact of specialisation to judicial reasoning. In the light of specialisation movements in the legal sector which has found its way into the court system whereby there are creations such as the National Industrial Court, specialist tribunals, and divisions specialising in different areas, the writer as a poser asks whether specialisation impacts on the quality of service and service delivery in the sector, what expertise in judicial adjudication means and whether specialisation impacts judicial reasoning process. Acknowledging the difficulty in deciphering the issue of expertise and specialisation, the writer notes “As a safe measure therefore, reference to specialisation will refer to the judge that sits over specialized cases or specialised court dealing with specified subject or related subjects while the generalist judge would refer to that judge who sits in a court of “unlimited” jurisdiction and adjudicating over any matter that comes before him irrespective of subject matter.”

    The writer examines the pros and cons of judicial specialisation while citing examples of specialised adjudication. This chapter concludes that proper evaluation of the substance of cases and good use of interpretation skills and other aids to judicial reasoning can better guarantee the goal of the justice system than mere subject matter expertise.

    Chapter 8 titled: Elevated Thought Process in Judicial reasoning, is written by Uchechukwu Ngwaba. Recognising that thought is a very significant factor in understanding judicial reasoning, it discusses it, stating that judicial reasoning is an elevated thought process. The chapter examines the different theories of judicial reasoning, which have arisen as a result of the disagreements about the reasoning process of judges. The writer analyses the various theories, namely the formalism, intuitionism and determinism. An important question of whether there can be any theoretical basis to explain the construction of human thought is asked. This chapter uses a philosophical approach to address the issue.

    He writes: “Revisiting the postulations of the scholarship on judicial reasoning, we notice that despite their divergent claims, a common ground is the understanding that in judicial reasoning, the ultimate objective of the judge is to do justice.”

    The writer says justice is not tangible or conscious. He explains that a judge’s reasoning embodies a method distinct from judicial decision making.

    In Chapter 9 titled: Logicality and Clarity of Judgments, is written by Nkiruka Chidia Maduekwe, access to justice is described as being tied to access to judgments. He analyses the essence of a logical and clear judgment, discusses importance of logic in judgments, warning that the art of thinking should not be confused with logic. It analyses the importance of clarity and logic in judgments as being essential tools in producing accessible judgments. It also sufficiently explains how the absence of clarity in judgment has far-reaching consequences on adjudication. The writer proffers some recommendations which will help to improve the quality of judgments.

    Chapter 10 is titled: The Judicial Doctrine of Pith and Substance and written by Adejoke O. Adediran. It examines the doctrine of pith and substance as created by the court in connection with judicial review of legislation is made. Tracing the history of the doctrine, the chapter discusses how it came about under the Canadian law by being developed by the Canadian courts.The purport of the doctrine in a federal system of government is discussed as well as what the courts usually determine in ascertaining the pith and substance of a case. Citing the purpose of the legislation and the legal effect of the law as instrumental in ascertaining the pith and substance of a case, the writer states that the court takes cognizance of both extrinsic and intrinsic evidence.

    On the judicial interpretation of the doctrine in Nigeria, she writes: “ …in a federal system where the legislative powers of legislatures are different, there is likelihood of encroachment by a legislature in the legislative field of another. The courts have always examined the law examined the law enacted vis a vis the legislative power contained in the constitution in order to determine whether such encroachment is merely incidental or substantive. The courts in Nigeria have applied this rule in a number of cases, although they might not expressly indicate that the rule is being applied.” The writer cites cases whereby the courts have applied this doctrine such as Attorney-General of Federation v Attorney-General of Lagos State, Attorney-General Abia v Attorney-General Federation, Attorney- General Lagos State v Eko Hotels ltd, among others. The essence of the doctrine as an effective means of interpretation of statutes in situations where enactments prima facie seem to be ultra vires is adequately discussed in this chapter.

    Chapter 11 is titled ‘Extra Legal Deductibles: A Search for the Fine Line between Law and Nuances’ and is written by Judith Chukwufumnanya Rapu. This chapter recognises the importance of the duty of the judge whose claim to power the writer claims is multi- faceted; first the nature of his office and secondly, the lives and destinies of several persons lie in the pronouncements he makes.

  • Learning fundamentals of effective business writing(2)

    ast week, we said there are four different skills of communication, that is, listening, reading, speaking and writing. We advised that business writing, especially for external communication to customers, suppliers, investors, etc., needs to be handled professionally because when it is done properly, it will enhance corporate image, boost business, among others.

    We said some principles are critical to effective business writing. These are conciseness, completeness, correctness, clarity, consideration, courtesy, concreteness, etc. We discussed some of them. This week, we will examine the remaining. We said to create or sustain goodwill, good business writing must show respect. We expatiated that even in the face of provocation from a customer or seller, politeness must not be sacrificed. We educated that the best way to do this is to use passive voice (even active voice) and sound impersonal by not mentioning the seller’s name. We gave examples of these.

    Courtesy

    … The two active and passive voice examples (given last week) are impersonal and courteous because we did not say, “We write to notify you that most of the goods WE WERE SUPPLIED BY YOU yesterday are not in good condition” (passive voice and personal) or “We write to notify you that most of the goods YOU SOLD TO US yesterday are not in good condition” (active voice and personal).

    Concreteness

    Another fundamental of effective business writing is concreteness. Here, one needs to use image-building words instead of obscure ones. The tone of a business letter for instance, must be specific and active, especially when one is not writing a complaint letter that requires passive voice. It must sound personal and effective. It must be definite and positive. Instead of saying: “Our products are always cheap”; say, “Prices of our small products range from N20, 000 to N30,000”. Do not say “We shall see very soon or next week”. Say “We shall meet with you on Tuesday, next week”.

    Sincerity

    Sincerity is another essential of effective business writing. To achieve this, do not use exaggeration or unnecessary flattery. A tone of courtesy and sincerity builds goodwill for you and your organisation, while your message will achieve its objective. Do not say: “A company like ours will collapse within two hours if you delay our payment”. Say “If you pay your bill before December 20, you will maintain your excellent credit history with our firm and help our operations”.

    Customers or readers are too intelligent to be deceived as they know when you are sincere. Avoid exaggeration through the use of too many modifiers or too strong modifiers and incredible expressions if you want to radiate tone of sincerity in your business writing. Do not say: “We shall work day and night to see that we satisfy you”. Say: “We appreciate your goodwill and have taken specific steps to ensure your satisfaction.”

    Unity

    Unity is also required to achieve effective business writing. Unity in a paragraph is achieved when the paragraph contains information that is directly related to the main idea (as contained in the topic sentence) and the information is presented it in a logical order with brevity. At this analytical juncture, let us give examples of sentences that have and lack unity.

    Example of unity: “Employees can be motivated in different ways. One of these is to give them sufficient salary. Another way is to allow them to go for further studies. They can also be motivated through transport allowance.”

    Example of lack of unity: “Employees can be motivated in different ways. I discussed with the HR manager recently on the need to sanction errant employees. We still meet this month to discuss ways of moving forward in this organisation”.

    Coherence

    Another fundamental of effective business writing is coherence. A paragraph radiates coherent when it contains sentences that are well integrated. Coherence is easily determined in a paragraph through effective use of transitional words, pronouns, repetition of key words and ideas, parallel structure that is, parallelism (agreeable combination of grammatical structures).

    Positive language

    Very close to courtesy is the need to use positive language. Positive language also builds goodwill like courtesy. But the two are not semantically-co-extensive; not totally the same. That is, positive language goes beyond respect (courtesy) as this also involves using positive words in ideas and structure instead of using words that sound negative to communicate positive expressions. For instance, instead of saying, “We do not use sub-standard materials for our production”; say, “We always use best quality or very standard materials for our production”.

     

    Leadership

    Most great and charismatic leaders are masters of communication. The fact must be stressed that corporate leaders must endeavour to make effective writing be part of their corporate culture, that is, a company-wide activity, a collective responsibility or a layer of responsibility just as it is done in journalism where a reporter will write a story, send it to his/her desk head after which the desk head will send it to the editor. Then the editor goes through and sends to sub-desk to go through and get back to him or her (the editor) for final approval. This is serious gate-keeping.

     

    Corporate writing culture/style

    To entrench a corporate culture of effective writing, organisations need to have regular language and communication training. As in journalism, they also need to have a style guide as part of their corporate culture of excellence and consistency. This is because the practice of good, collaborative writing makes the difference between great business and bad business; between loss and profitability.

    • Concluded

    PS: For those making inquiries about our Public Speaking, Business Presentation and Professional Writing Skills programme, please visit the website indicated on this page for details. Till we meet on Monday.

    •GOKE ILESANMI, Managing Consultant/CEO of Gokmar Communication Consulting, is an International Platinum Columnist, Certified Public Speaker/MC, Communication Specialist, Motivational Speaker and Career Management Coach. He is also a Book Reviewer, Biographer and Editorial Consultant.

     

    Tel: 08055068773; 08187499425

    Email: gokeiles2010@gmail.com

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  • Writing, as if life itself depended on it (3)

    Writing, as if life itself depended on it (3)

    [For Festus Iyayi: radical humanist; writer; neorealist artificer]

    Jacobinism: 1. The principles and practices of the Jacobins. 2. The egalitarianism and terrorism of the Jacobins of the French Revolution of 1789. 3. Any violent or revolutionary political extremism
    Webster’s Third New International Dictionary of the English Language (Unabridged), 1993

    An Awaiting Court Martial there is a great, romping delight in telling stories and telling them well, much greater than what we get in the earlier novels. This is the most distinctive literary mark of this book of short stories. Of course the fictional imagination is not without considerable merit in the three novels, but simply in terms of stories as stories, of tales told for their gripping or spellbinding effect, we are almost in a new imaginative territory in this particular work of Iyayi. Much of this effect depends on the stories themselves, on their haunting, spectral quality. Let me give a few examples.

    In “Jegede’s Madness” which, at about 42 pages is not only the longest story in the collection but is also formalistically a novella, the tale climaxes with the maniacal search of the protagonist, Jonathan Alawa, for a cure for his sexual impotence. He consults experts in scientific medicine, to no avail. Then he turns to the “witchdoctors” and every single one he consults tells him that he must sleep with a particular madwoman, a prescription which at first he rejects until desperation pushes him to try to sleep with every madwoman in surrounding cities and villages, still without any success. Meanwhile he does not know that the madwoman he must sleep with is his own wife, Elisa, a great beauty of surpassing aloofness who had gone mad after a White Colonial District Officer had tried forcibly but unsuccessfully to seduce her, the seduction being something Alawa himself had arranged in order to become a fabulously wealthy middleman with the colonial and commercial lords of the land. At the end of the tale, Alawa himself goes mad as his entire palatial mansion is overrun by the miasmic stench from the gargantuan mass of his unflushed defecations.

    In both the title story, “Awaiting Court Martial” and the sixth story in the collection, “When They Came for Akika Lamidi”, we find harrowing tales of characters who are completely crushed by a military dictatorship whose assumption of power over life and death is however compromised and undercut by the paranoia of the rulers. In the title story, the victims of this paranoiac, sadistic power are two siblings who, from within the ranks of the autocratic military machine itself, break ranks with the arbitrariness of militarism and confront the madness of the rulers with – laughter, a laughter that rings out powerfully at the very moment when the victims should have been shaking with terror. Akika Lamidi, the eponymous protagonist of the story in whose title his name features prominently, is a newspaper cartoonist. On the fateful night on which “they” came for him, he and members of his family at first think the “visitors” are armed robbers. But from the terror of what to expect from lawless bandits, Akika soon moves to the more paralyzing terror of what is coming from the “lawful” squad from the SSS that has come for him on account of his subversive cartoons against the regime. He is very brutally killed, but before the termination of his life he has a short but riveting conversation with the murderous visitors during which Akika experiences the satisfaction of discovering that the supposedly omnipotent military rulers have an irrational, obsessive fear of him and his corrosively subversive newspaper cartoons.

    I do not wish to give the impression that in all the stories in Awaiting Court Martial, it is a recurring case of terrifying or harrowing endgame for the protagonists. Definitely, except for “Sunflowers”, the shortest and the last story in the collection which ends on a hopeful, optimistic note, no story in the collection affords the reader an unambiguous relief from the parade of life-changing encounters with the darkest impulses of the human psyche. But there are stories – like “Na Only One Pikin”, “Our Father Is Coming Home”, “She Will Be Buried Here”, and “Three Times Unlucky” – in which, metaphorically speaking, after the purgatory comes the redemption as profoundly chastened characters learn more about themselves and the world than they had ever remotely thought possible or anticipated. What I can affirm as true to all the stories in the collection is the fact that Iyayi goes to the roots of characters as individuals driven either by their passions and appetites – for sex, for love, for life, for fulfillment – or by their fears, their weaknesses, their manias and eccentricities.

    In such a wide and capacious canvas, workers and the poor do not occupy the centre of narrative or thematic attention as in the three previous novels. All classes and fractions of classes are present in the totality of the stories. What is even more subtly and sensitively hinted at but deliberately never made explicit in the stories is the fact that class is refracted through desires and manias that fuel the narrative energy of the stories as Iyayi constantly weaves into narratives of existential crises brief but unforgettable snippets of description or dialogue detailing the nightmare that reigns everywhere in a country under the heel of a draconian, corrupt and dehumanizing military rule. The nightmare reality is there, omnipresent and suffusing, but it is so ineluctably rendered by Iyayi that the casual reader might miss it, almost in the manner in which blood runs through the arteries and the veins, invisible to the naked eye but incontrovertibly there as the source of an organism’s life or, conversely, ill-health. This is what makes Awaiting Court Martial perhaps the most subtle, the most powerful literary work that we have on militarist misrule in Nigeria in particular and the African continent in general. Thus, radical class consciousness is very present, very clamant in these stories, only it is no longer consciousness of class as seen primarily or exclusively through the prism of oppressors versus the oppressed, of exploiters ranged against the exploited as we encounter it in the three novels, Violence, The Contract and Heroes. This is the mark of the decisive move in Iyayi’s works from social realism to what, for want of a better term, I am calling neorealism in this tribute.

    Famously of infamously, depending on where one stands ideologically, Soyinka once called leftists and radicals in Nigerian literature and criticism of the late 70s and 80s “Leftocrats”, going further to call that stage of our modern literary and intellectual culture a “Jacobin moment”. Soyinka used these terms neither in neutrality nor approval, but with scathing disparagement of what he considered the revolutionary, doctrinaire extremism of the Osofisans, the Iyayis, the Omotosos, the Jeyifos, the Darahs and the Osundares. Well, Soyinka should know, for he also had his own individual Jacobin literary moments in such works as The Man Died, Season of Anomie and Madmen and Specialists!

    If there is indeed a Jacobin moment in modern Nigerian literature that produced plays, poems, fiction and essays that were accomplished on literary as well as political-ideological grounds, Iyayi’s first three works of fiction that I have placed within the social realist mode in this tribute loomed large in that formation of revolutionary writings of exceptional force. In this respect, Iyayi is in the company of contemporaries and fellow travelers like Odia Ofeimun, Niyi Osundare, Kole Omotoso and Femi Osofisan, all of whom, without exception, had their own inevitable appointment with Jacobinism and then moved beyond and away from it when, gradually and subtly, we discovered that the revolution was going to come only through a long and complex historical process.

    There are two things to note here in passing. In the first place, this was a literary and cultural Jacobinism that was, unlike Soyinka’s ferocious incarnation of it in the works I identified above, a collective movement, a very conscious and in some cases programmatic one. Secondly, it is worthy of note that Iyayi’s “Jacobinism” was more grounded and more systematically thought through than that of any others among his contemporaries, especially in his first and third novels, Violence and Heroes. And for good measure, if we can now talk of a Post-Jacobin phase in our national literature that began in the 90s and persists in many currents to the present moment, Iyayi’s book of short stories, Awaiting Court Martial, is perhaps more paradigmatic of this phase than any other single work of which I can personally think. What meaning, what portents do I attach to this observation, this claim?

    By way of indirectly engaging this question, I wish to write specifically now of my rather very astonishing personal relations with Iyayi as a writer. Among the radical, committed writers of my generation, I have had the closest ideological affinities and activist engagements with Iyayi. It strikes me now as very odd that it is precisely with Iyayi that I have never had any conversations on writing. Both within the specific context of ASUU and in the broader framework of the social movement for progressive change in our country, we had long conversations on radical politics and activism on nearly every subject. But we never once talked about writing! With Osofisan, Ofeimun, Osundare, Omotoso, Darah and the late Omafume Onoge I had innumerable discussions about art, writing and politics. But never with Iyayi! It is extremely embarrassing for me to say it now, but it was always as if we had far more important things to discuss and act upon than – mere writing!

    Writing – good, significant and radical writing – should never be considered a mere subsidiary activity by a truly mature progressive or revolutionary movement. This deeply problematic attitude has indeed had one deleterious effect on the institutional aspects of the publication of Iyayi’s works, virtually all of them, but especially the most accomplished one, Awaiting Court Martial. Let me state this as simply and directly as possible: the publishers of Iyayi’s works, Longman and Malthouse, did very little of the pre-publication editorial work that all works in general require and significant works positively demand. Indeed, it is no secret that Longman thought of the series within which Iyayi’s novels were published as just a cut above the Onitsha Market chapbook tradition! There is not the slightest doubt in my mind that had Iyayi’s first three novels been published within the imprimatur of the much more professional Heinemann African Writers Series, his reputation and the standing of those three novels would be much greater and wider than it is now. With Malthouse and Awaiting Court Martial, the level of professionalism was even more compromised, both editorially and typographically. It is thus a telling mark of the quality and strength of Iyayi’s writing in these works that they rose above the institutional constraints of the circumstances of their production. But this should not blind us to one urgent task: Awaiting Court Martial needs to be re-issued, this time with the kind of gifted and conscientious editorial work that it deserves.

    If this tribute does nothing else, I certainly hope that it has now laid to rest the ghost of that unwitting philistine attitude to art and writing of the Nigerian Left in the 70s and 80s, the attitude that regarded writing as something you did on the side while you were engaged in the “real” tasks of the revolution. This is only one among a host of revaluations that we need to do and I can think of few as rich with possibilities for this task as Iyayi, the writer, the artificer, the consummate storyteller.

    Concluded.

    Biodun Jeyifo

    bjeyifo@fas.harvard.edu

  • Writing, as if life itself depended on it (2)

    Writing, as if life itself depended on it (2)

    [For Festus Iyayi: radical humanist; writer; neorealist artificer]

    What is the decisive shift that occurred in Iyayi’s writings in the 1990s? Can one even talk of a “shift” in a corpus that is comparatively “slim”, comprising, as it does, only four published works of fiction? My response to these two questions is, of course, affirmative: yes, there is a very discernible shift in Iyayi’s writings; and yes, one can validly talk of shifts even within two, not to say four, works of an author – as long as such shifts are so apparent, so decisive as not to even remotely seem to be the factitious projection of the critic’s own fantasies or delusions.

    The most apparent, the most undeniable shift in Iyayi’s writings is the one between, on the one hand, the first three published works of the late 70s and 80s, Violence (1979), The Contract (1982) and Heroes (1986) and, on the other hand, Awaiting Court Martial (1996). The most discernible change is formal or generic: the first three titles are works of full-blown novelistic fiction while Awaiting Court Martial is a collection of fifteen short stories only one of which, “Jegede’s Madness”, has the length and the narrative scope to qualify as a novella. It is of course possible that the ten years between the publication of Heroes and Awaiting Court Martial might not really amount to a genuine temporal hiatus since some of the stories collected in the latter could very well have been written either before the publication of the former or contemporaneously with it. But there are clear indications that with the move from the novel to the short story something very decisive, very fundamental has taken place in Iyayi’s writings. Indeed, it is on account of this very fact that I gave this essay its title: writing, as if life itself depended on it. For this title is far more appropriate, far more germane to the kind of writing that we confront in Awaiting Court Martial than what we see of literary art in the preceding three works of fiction, even though there are intimations of this kind of writing here and there in the previous works.

    This observation has a rather intriguing aspect that we ought to highlight here: if Iyayi is unquestionably so much at his very best as a writer in the collection of short stories, what is even more enigmatic is the fact that in Awaiting Court Martial we encounter a form of radical writing that is not easy to categorize, a mode of storytelling that inscribes literary radicalism far more complexly than anything we find in the three novels. Let me expatiate on this crucial claim by starting, first, with some incontrovertible differences in themes, style and narrative technique between these two phases of Iyayi’s writings before moving to more substantive points of theoretical and ideological import that I shall subsume under the rubrics of social realism and neorealism.

    The plots, the characters and the themes of the first three novels characteristically revolve around the struggles of protagonists against an oppressive, neocolonial social order that is unspeakable in its barbarity, ferocity and mediocrity. In Violence, this takes the form of an unrelenting struggle of Idemudia, the protagonist, to get a better sense of the corrosive effects of this barbaric social order on both his dire social circumstances and on his inner life, especially as this is excruciatingly played out in tortured and uneasy relations with his wife, Adisa, and with his co-workers. In The Contract, this oppressive social order seems infinitely more entrenched, more impregnable, so much so that the protagonist, Ogie Obala, decides that the best thing to do is to find out how best to compromise with it on his own terms so as not to be eaten up and destroyed by it. And in Heroes, with graphic, terrifying accounts of atrocities on both sides of the Nigerian civil war as its searing backdrop, the protagonist, Osime Iyere, is in a world even more horrific in its dehumanizing and brutalizing acts and effects than what we had encountered in the two previous novels. For this reason, Osime Iyere finds that he must do something that neither of the protagonists of the two previous novels have had to do and that is completely and existentially unlearn virtually everything he had always thought and taken for granted – about his country, his neighbors, the combatant forces in the civil war and their conflicting claims and, above all else, himself.

    In all three novels, Iyayi writes so powerfully and so truthfully about the Nigerian neocolonial version of what Hannah Arendt has famously called the banality of evil that it is no exaggeration to state that the sheer vigor and eloquence of the testamentary quality of his writing in these three novels is almost without equal in postcolonial Nigerian literature. In all, I have read these three novels several times and each single act of reading finds me in the profoundly disquieting stance of being compelled to actually like the novelistic depiction of an order of existence in our country about which there are almost no redeeming things to write about. In such moments when I have been either reading or rereading Violence, The Contract and Heroes, I have had to remind myself that I also liked Dante’s literary depiction of purgatory in Inferno; the difference of course is that the “inferno” so memorably rendered in Iyayi’s three novels is one that we are living in, the one that continues to haunt us at the present moment when this essay is being written.

    The strength, the quality of the writing in these three novels thus rests a lot on evocations of place, context and environment that are external to the inner lives, the inner struggles of the protagonists. But not exclusively so, for at the same time that he invests so much narrative space and skill to the depiction of external forces impacting on his protagonists, Iyayi manages to get deep under the emotional and psychic skin of these characters. In graphic terms, the characters literally and figuratively have their backs against the wall of material and psychological survival, whether in the jungle of the commoditized public sphere of endlessly crooked business deals or the emotional wildernesses of marital or erotic private spaces in which spouses and lovers find that the “enemy” is as much within as it is outside in corrupt public officials and their repressive political misrule. Indeed, with the possible exception of Soyinka, no radical Nigerian writer has explored so powerfully this interior psychic and moral space of the “enemy within” in his protagonists.

    I must of course not fail to note here that occasionally this exploration by Iyayi of psychic and moral self-division within his characters is handled rather awkwardly in a formulaic manner in which “voices” representing either “good” or “evil”, rectitude or cynicism battle for the soul of the protagonists. But side by side with these instances of predictable and “convenient” narrative crutches, there are innumerable instances in which, through either dialogue or extended ruminative authorial description, Iyayi stands tall and ramrod straight as a writer as he confidently and masterfully deploys fresh, probing and often mesmerizing prose to do the work of laying bare the inner moral and psychological torments or, as the case may be, victories of his characters. And to his great credit, Iyayi confers this particular narrative “privilege” as much on the “heroes” as on the “villains”, as much on the workers and the oppressed as on the exploiters and their cronies and hirelings, especially in the first two of the three novels, Violence and The Contract.

    So much then for what we encounter by way of characters, plot and narrative style in Iyayi’s three novels of the Seventies and Eighties, all pointing to a radical, committed writer who very deliberately if also often memorably bends the art and craft of fiction to openly avowed ideological and political purposes. The term “social realism” has been applied to these three novels; some critics have even been more specific and have mentioned the more ideologically loaded label of “socialist realism”. There is no denying the appropriateness of these terms to Iyayi’s writing in these novels. But then, there are socialist realists and there are socialist realists. The label, the badge does not automatically confer significance on the writer; significance has to be earned and Iyayi consistently gives proof in his novels that he has earned it. He is definitely one of the most successful socialist realists in contemporary Nigerian writing and one of the important exemplars of the “school” in postcolonial African writing. But more on this point later in this tribute.

    With regard to the book of short fiction, Awaiting Court Martial, we are in an entirely different literary, artistic universe than the worlds of the three novels. Perhaps the most compelling proof of this is that no critic or scholar can “accuse” Iyayi of either “social realism” or “socialist realism” in this collection of short stories. There are some very obvious, very easily perceived indications of this shift, but so are there much more subtle factors that require critical vigilance and “readerly” sensitivity to nuances of language and style to discern them. Let us take the more obvious factors first, on the condition that we will then subject their “obviousness” to radical, deconstructive critique.

    In Awaiting Court Martial, there are absolutely no characters like Idemudia and Adisa (Violence), Ogie Obala, Rose Idebale and Eunice Agbon (The Contract) and Osime Iyere (Heroes), characters who struggle mightily to come to grips with the crushing weight of the oppression, exploitation and corruption in the land and in their lives. Of the fifteen stories in the collection, only four – the title story, “Awaiting Court Martial”, “Saira”, “Extracts from the Testimony”, and “When They Came for Akika Lamidi” – have characters or themes that entail the depiction of struggles against oppression in its myriad forms and expressions. But in none of these stories are we close to what we encounter in the three novels and the clearest sign of this is the telling fact that in each of these four stories in Awaiting Court Martial, the struggle is utterly defeated. Moreover – and this point is crucial – in the eleven other stories in the collection, the struggles, the conflicts have far less to do with socio-economic or socio-political issues than with confrontations that could more appropriately be described as existential, woven as they are around the dilemma or the anguish of how to live or die well in a world in which deceit, bad faith, cynicism and rampant indifference to human suffering are the reigning values that determine and shape all relationships. Indeed, in comparison with Iyayi’s three novels, it is nothing short of astonishing that the working class in particular and, more generally, subaltern groups and those who struggle on their behalf are, so to speak, greatly “underrepresented’ in Awaiting Court Martial. Conversely, characters with a middle class professional background clearly predominate in the stories in the volume.

    These are the more apparent, the more obvious shifts in character, “plot” and themes that we find in the movement from the earlier three novels to the collection of shorter stories in the book that I, along with a few other critics, deem the best work to date of Iyayi as a writer. But what are the not so apparent, more subtle shifts in Awaiting Court Martial the perception of which should lead us, as I wish to suggest, to an interpretation of this work that might lead us to a fruitful, radical and progressive analysis of a collection of stories in which, for the most part, we encounter only catastrophes and defeats? This will be our starting point in next week’s concluding essay in the series.

    To be continued.

    Biodun Jeyifo

    bjeyifo@fas.harvard.edu